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Here's another way to say it>
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Lady300Z
on October 03, 2001 at 11:01 AM
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NZR- HELP!! can you advise if this is right? >>
posted by maverick (NYC)
on October 03, 2001 at 10:54 AM
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Maybe word it like this:
My experiences have included working for some of the most well-known, key players in the technology-based industries.
That sounds good to me, IMO.
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NZR- HELP!! can you advise if this is right? >>
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maverick (NYC)
10:54:11 10/03/01
"the" does not go with "industries" .. plural vs. singular (n/m)
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Elguapo (Dallas)
11:00:38 10/03/01
Here's another way to say it> -
Lady300Z
11:01:37 10/03/01
hey ladyz . wheres wagz been. u got him tied up (n/m)
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xaviar
11:20:50 10/03/01
also, get rid of well .. most respected is better (n/m)
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Elguapo (Dallas)
11:01:42 10/03/01
Be more specific in a cover letter, using the cover letter
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JeffZTT (Lurker)
11:15:31 10/03/01
THANKS guys (and gal =) I made a few changes >>
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maverick (NYC)
11:21:01 10/03/01
Don't use the two discriptives, well and most. Redundant. (n/m)
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DougG
13:34:03 10/03/01
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