Jan 08'
"On-track picture from Laguna Seca's famous corkscrew..."You elected to use the pictures from Thunderhill, not the ones from Laguna Seca that I sent you. So, you either need to delete that sentence or change the Laguna Seca reference to Thunderhill Raceway. This one stands out the most, but I also noted that you did not make any of the other changes I sent you about my month. Here they are again: Jan08 (my month): "Competitions Wheels" -> "Competition Wheels". It should read "1mm Oversized Valves", I can't tell from the online picture if it says "1" or something else. "Eiback springs" -> "Eibach Springs". "Tokico Shocks" -> "Tokico 5-way Adjustable Shocks". "On track picture from Laguna Seca" -> "On track picture from Thunderhill Raceway". (You did not use the Laguna Seca corkscrew picture, so please remove or change this text. The pictures you used were from Thunderhill Raceway, in Willows, CA. The one I sent you of my car by itself was coming down the Laguna Seca corkscrew. Is there still time to swap for the other picture in the corkscrew as the main one? "350Z seats" -> Please move up higher in the mod description versus down after the horsepower and track notes. 
I did not recheck the other 12 months again, but refer to the very length email I sent you 12/12, copied below for your ease: January: Engine details before "7" touch panel"
Feb: tt.net member?
March: "YBBBK" should be spelled out. I assume this is a "YugoBernie Big Brake Kit", which should read "Big Brake Kit Designed by Bernie Bilski" "BMCB" - Brake
Master Cylinder Brace. "Surround" seems out of place on the 2nd line. The wheel details should read G35, not g35, and be certain there is a decimal between 7 and 5 for 17x7.5. I'd also remove the offset values from his wheel specs.
April: "Jun" --> "JUN" "Random technology" -> "Random Technology"
May: A little confusing because of all the text, but clearly space is limited. The "*" on the 120mph trap speed doesn't reference anything.
June: "Mafs" -> either "MAFs" or "Mass Airflow Sensors".
July: Stats exceed allotted space on the top. "Pop" -> "POP". At the end of his description it just says "Jspec", but doesn't reference what is Jspec...
Aug:
Sep: "Clear Corners" -> "Clear corner side markers". "GT28r's" -> "GT28RS". "silicon boost hoses" -> "Stillen silicone boost hoses". "Recently pulled the engine...slave, etc." -> get rid of.
Oct:
Nov: "Stillen S. M. Intercoolers" -> "Stillen larger side mount intercoolers". "GT600r's" -> "GT600R turbos". "Chromo pivot ball" -> "Chrome-moly pivot ball" or "CrMo pivot ball".
Dec: "Cross Drilled" -> "Cross-drilled"
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