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Subject first thing I would do is get some help with English
     
Posted by toyluvr on January 17, 2001 at 3:48 PM
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In Reply To NZR. Help! Out of work for almost 3 months, I need to find-> posted by lovtnaZ on January 17, 2001 at 12:02 PM
     
Message basics. Just as a sample in an early sentence in the doc,

"teams of Two Persons, Who in which were assigned a certain region of Alabama. My Partner and I had the northwestern region (Birmingham North & Huntsville West). We physically visited each sight assigned to us."

'Two Persons' should be lower case

'Who' would be lower case, but 'who in which were' should be dropped completely, so it does not matter

'Partner' should be lower case

'sight' should be site

And it goes on and on.

For someone 'shopping' your document on line, most would completely pass just based on presentation. Seems unfair; you may be a technical genius. But thats the way it is when you are depending on printed text to 'sell' yourself.

Rework it and see if you don't start getting some hits.

Good luck!


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